Feb 19, 2018RebelBelle13 rated this title 0.5 out of 5 stars
What. Is. This. Why is this a best-seller? I'm very confused. Perhaps this comes across better as spoken, with bongo drums in the background, in a dark coffee shop with beatniks snapping their fingers. Here's a prime example of this "modern poetry":
the abused
and the
abuser
-i have been both
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I could write better poetry in the bathroom. If it sounds like I'm angry, it's because I am. THIS is what passes for poetry nowadays? How ridiculously sad. Here, I'll write something just like it, completely off the cuff, for your enjoyment:
the door
caused a ripple
in my heart
when you slammed it
and shut
me
out
- when you left
There, take that and put it in a book. Do I get to make money now?
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